Tuesday, 17 September 2019

1 day. The Greatest Library

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This was no ordinary library. When the books begin to fly, gracefully, the girl eyes blend into the pages and end up going to places out of this world. When the town hall rings, r r r r , she leaps into the great library, the books begin to scatter like a rainbow.

 
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2 comments:

  1. Nicole Mills18 September 2019 at 14:15

    Hi Oshani. I really like how you described how the girl's eyes blended into the pages. Well done on using some adverbs in your writing. Next time try and use an -ly (adverb) to begin your writing. e.g. Silently, the girl sat with her head buried in the book.

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  2. Anonymous21 October 2019 at 13:17

    KIA Ora thanks for going on my blog and commenting . Can you do same think like that? blog you later Oshani.

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